I’m back to reading Bloom again — this Shakespeare thing is a great break from editing projects and the Wheel of Fortune, Employment version — and I just finished his chapter on Romeo and Juliet. Relevant to Bloom’s title, he states that Romeo, Juliet, the Nurse, and Mercutio are some of Shakespeare’s earliest “exuberantly realized characters”, and goes on in that vein for awhile.
I have recently held that Romeo and Juliet could equally have been a comedy as a tragedy. Until Tybalt’s death, everything in the play is reversible, or attributable only to chance; even with the deaths of Tybalt and Mercutio, there is still a chance for a happy ending. Bloom agrees with me, to a point:
With just a few alterations, Shakespeare could have transformed Romeo and Juliet into a play as cheerful as A Midsummer Night’s Dream. The young lovers, escaped to Mantua or Padua, would not have been victims of Verona, or of bad timing, or of cosmological contraries asserting their sway. Yet this travesty would have been intolerable for us, and for Shakespeare….
It is that very possibility that makes the play so magnetic. It could work out well, but it just doesn’t.
Bloom also quotes Hazlitt, describing Act II, Scene ii (”O swear not by the moon, th’inconstant moon”), in a sentence that I think describes the larger play as well:
[Shakespeare] has founded the passion of the two lovers not in the pleasures they had experienced, but on all the pleasures they had not experienced.
Part of the tragedy is that they’ve only had a taste of the deep love that they could have. They barely know what they’re missing, but the audience knows exactly. Bloom says of a later scene (”Wilt thou be gone? It is not yet near day”) that “Romeo and Juliet’s aubade is so disturbing precisely because they are not courtly love sophisticates working through a stylized ritual.” Had the play been about such sophisticates, the tragedy would not have cut so deeply, may not have endured as long as it has. Shakespeare has turned the world and the very stars against these young and innocent lovers, while such sophisticates live to woo another day. Romeo and Juliet have been married for mere days, have loved each other once, before they die. It’s absolutely heartrending.
I don’t think Shakespeare started writing the play as a comedy and changed his mind halfway through. I think he meant it as a tragedy the whole time, unless he went back and edited heavily to make those drastic changes and add in all the little unfortunate circumstances and near misses. (Bloom asserts that Shakespeare did so with Hamlet, that the “Ur-Hamlet” was written by Shakespeare himself as an earlier draft of the play we now have as Hamlet.) But I do think that the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet hinges on the possibility of a happy ending, and the fact that such an ending is denied.


